I Write Better Than You

Thank you so much for proofing a rather tedious résumé. Dan did not even shoot for a particular job or go for an interview; he just dropped off his now well-​manicured résumé at two offices and received calls from both the next day and was offered a position at one and the other was not a good fit (a position was offered despite this).
You worked tirelessly with him to crank out a résumé detailing his education, work experience, and volunteering. The format was pleasing to the eye and succinct.
I applaud your entrepreneurial spirit to start a business aimed at helping others and support yourself. We will use you in the future should the need arise. Now we can rest easier knowing Dan will begin a job that offers benefits such as paid FMLA, health insurance for the entire family, IRA contributions and a chance for growth.